On Tuesday I woke up and I saw a blue thing, when I came in the living room. My sister came out and I told her about the blue thing. In a little while later my mum came in and I told her too. In the afternoon the blue thing was actually a duck so we feed it lettuces. My sister and I were scared because my sister said "ducks can hurt you.''Night time was here so the duck left . The next day it came back and we feed it more lettuce, then it left.
When my sister was making brownie but some was still raw. The next day my sister got a tummy bug.
On Thursday I was writing my speech, my topic was "why books are better than movies". It was hard but I got it done it had important facts in it, here is one, " I didn't add did you now that us human's watched more television than reading books" .Cool right ? there are 3 facts that I put in but I won't, as it is long..
Week 2 of my holiday, Monday it was raining so hard like pouring .We had to help in the shop because we got a new freezer but oh no the shop went leacking my dad and uncle had to fix it.
The next day my sister and I got a hair cut after the hair cut my sister and I loved it so much we couldn't stop touching it.Soon we got Subway 1 foot long then we ate.Later my mum phone my dad he took a long time and we got home.We helped in the shop because we went to pack 'n save.
This is wonderful holiday news. I am so proud of your writing, you are doing such an amazing job. You did a great job with your punctuation and paragraphs.
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